The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/16
What a great story. Superb characterization and super smooth delivery. It's like you teach writing or something. I loved the interaction with ladies before and during the social. This is top notch and what I have missed. Excellent! The read was time very well spent!
04/14/16
I very much enjoyed this story and its hilarious humor. You've done well with this and I won't be surprised if this is one of the winners.
04/16/16
Wow! This was just excellent all the way through. Your characterizations, the subtle and not-so-subtle humor woven throughout, and the way you conveyed so much with some of tightest writing I've ever read, make this a clear winner in my mind.

Great, great job!
04/16/16
It's funny how life can turn one friend into something new while the other is changed only by the circumstances.

Interesting and amusing at once.

Nicely done.

Blessings~
I loved your characters and the subtle humor you interjected throughout the piece.

I could totally identify with the clown face. I went to a makeup party and ended up looking like I belonged at a circus.

Delightful read.
This was an amusing read and so well crafted...adding to my favorites and wouldn't be surprised if it's chosen as a winner! Congrats!
04/20/16
Eleanor and Gertie were delightful older ladies. I enjoyed the humor and creativeness of this story.

I think you meant: "I look like [a] clown."
04/21/16
Congrats Leola!
Well done,
Blessings~
04/21/16
Congratulations, Leola, on you 2nd place EC award. It didn't surprise me that your story was in the top five. You have such a gift of storytelling and developing memorable characters.

I've marked it in my favorites, so I can review how to write better dialogue.
04/21/16
Congratulations Leola! A well deserved 2nd place EC!
05/10/16
Well done and entertaining. Your characters had that sense of reality which makes a story believable.
Congratulations on your EC 2nd place.