The Official Writing Challenge
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03/17/16
I'm speechlessly in awe! It drew me in so much that I couldn't read fast enough. Then to end it with Said seeking to learn about Jesus was the pivotal point of the story. You didn't leave the reader sad for Abdullah, but full of joy at the prospect of Said becoming a Christian. You fully proclaimed the Gospel with your story. wow One of the best I've read. Keep up the good work.
This multi-layered story is well told. Not only does it exemplify persecution and forgiveness, but the danger of favoritism within families. You may have already noticed that you had the wrong brother's name for the one crying out.
03/18/16
Wonderfully written!
03/18/16
This story was brilliant. I felt like the tale unfolded before my eyes.

I hope this does well in the challenge.
03/21/16
I echo the others sentiments!
Well done...
Blessings~
03/24/16
Congrats!
Blessings~
03/24/16
Congratulations, Gary, on your well deserved 5th place EC award. Powerful piece of writing.
Congratulations Gary, on your piece placing.
Very well done. Congratulations on your EC win.
04/15/16
From the title all the way through you held me spellbound. Well done and provocative as always.