The Official Writing Challenge
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03/18/16
I liked the story line, but I thought you really over did the word "smear".
03/18/16
I liked the twists and turns of the story. While I think the word smear was overuse, I can understand why you did it.
03/21/16
Good job with the topic!
Well done...
Blessings~
I really liked the creativity of the story. You used some great descriptions and I though the tags like "jacket-owner" and "jacket-wearer" we're cute. But for me, the smear references detracted from the story, bringing the focus on the references themselves. I did like the way you tied it together at the end, though. Well written piece.