The Official Writing Challenge
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03/10/16
You have expressed a very real problem faced by today's generation of children.
This is an excellent portrayal of problems of families in our nation, leading to even greater problems.
You addressed a really big challenge in the size of families. The family tree project was a way to point out how confusing it can be chart. If you're adoped, it can be even more daunting.

I thought you could have showed one specific family member resarching the family and given examples.
03/11/16
Excellent job with content approach and delivery.

Nicely done.

God bless~