The Official Writing Challenge
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Hahahaha! I can imagine what sarge replied to that one!

This took me back to the days of National Service. My brothers were called up and couldn't wait to get started. It was a bit of a culture shock after mother's pampering, and they couldn't wait to get back home. They still relate funny tales about the experience.

A cute story with a fun last line!

Really cute and delightful read.

You did a great job of this. I loved the ending.
This was fun! I haven't left comments on bricks in a while--yours is the first, and it was a very pleasant read. It seems to me that your writing style has evolved a bit--this is both entertaining and literary.

(I seem to remember that html formatting doesn't work in titles, for some reason.)

This has a great kicker, and I thank you for providing a lovely read for my first foray back in a while.
Congratulations on ranking 18th overall. Happy Dance!
Haha. I can relate to saying dumb things to get off on the wrong foot. I enjoyed this.