The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a cute parable for kids, or perhaps even us folks who don't like change. :)
03/05/16
Cute story about accepting change in a positive way. It could be used to teach young children about how the body or voice develops.
03/05/16
Creative and fun!

Blessings~
03/06/16
Great story with clever descriptions.
I like the parallels that wrap up your story, though it may cause some readers to be tadpol-arised.
Oh this is a delightful story. I think everyone can relate to Timmy on one level or another. I know I can. You did a great job with the pacing of this delightful story. Your words painted a vivid picture for me too.
03/10/16
Congratulations, Gerald, on your 6th place EC award. This was one of my favorite entries this week.
03/11/16
Congrats!
Blessings~