The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/16
This was a vivid picture of the struggled so many people face. Great job with this piece.
Wow, this is stunning. I'm always impressed how someone can paint such vivid touching pictures with poems. That's not my gift, but you touched my heart. You're a true artist.
03/04/16
I loved this, that you captured the dilemma that one can be a Christian yet still struggle with addiction...and that hope can be found "one day at a time".
The 2nd and 3rd stanzas danced to a slightly different rhythm than the rest - was this your intention?
Great work.
03/04/16
Well done!

Blessings~
03/04/16
I have a friend who is an addict. You painted a powerful picture through your poem.
Congratulations on ranking 25 overall. Happy Dance!