The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/16
I sense some strong but subtle undercurrents through the pain in this almost poetically-constructed story, and I appreciate the gentle advice that wraps it up.
03/02/16
First I thought one of the characters in the story was a hoarder. It is true that postal workers enjoy a huge amount of stress. I am glad the MC decided to try to understand her husband at the end of the story.
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