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02/18/16
I have been Dee more times than I care to admit. Good story. God bless.
I particularly like the way you paced this interesting story.
02/22/16
Good story that resonates with a number of us. I liked the way you showed how Dee's family life was affected by her overworking. Coming face to face with the Truth of the Word was a perfect place to end because it gives the reader a break to reflect on his/her own life, too.
02/22/16
There's a worthy message attached to this story that many of us could take heed of. You rounded the story off well. Great job
02/23/16
In my second read through I realized from the beginning of your story you gave the reader the reason Dee was in the swing.

I enjoy stories that encourage a second read to get all the facts!

02/24/16
What a beautiful, patient piece! I love how you end w/hope for tomorrow; "something new..."

Beautiful:)
This is a great story and true of way too many people today. Your message is one we all need reminding of.
I am finally yielding to my age and inability to be everyone's everything everywhere. Thank you for writing such a good piece . . .
Congratulations on ranking 23 overall. Happy Dance!