The Official Writing Challenge
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Clever parallels with Jesus' parable - or should I have said "parallelable?"
Loved the cooks' names too!
Well done.
I love allegories like these. You captured the commentator's surprise so well.
This was seriously amusing. I found your punctuation somewhat odd, but I am not a grammar teacher. It was distracting for me, however.
I liked the MCs commentary at the wedding banquet. Modern and fresh interpretation of this parable.
You asked what punctuation I thought was incorrect. Again, I am not a grammar teacher but in the first p. these seemed wrong.
; between scholar and coming
; between event and ever
; between dish and in order

and you omitted the word "you" as.......

These are the things that stood out; you followed the same system throughout.

It was such a good piece that I felt sorry for what to me was distracting.
Trying to be helpful,not critical
All I can offer is "well done..." I enjoyed this piece from start to finish.

Congratulations on ranking 18th overall. Happy Dance.