The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/16
I enjoyed this story very much. You paced it well, slowly revealing the details about what happened. I'd like to meet a traveler like Joseph. Great job!
02/10/16
Wonderful job in content, delivery and feeling!

God bless~
This piece had a nice flow to it. It would be remarkable to meet a Joseph.
Congratulations on ranking 12th overall. Happy Dance!