The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an incredibly neat story! Well-written and totally engaging. I'm a sucker for time-travel stories. This was a very creative use of the topic. I hope it does well in the challenge.
Amazing story! I went back and re-read the opening once I'd finished. Your piece was gripping. Well done.
Some amazing sci-fi here! I really enjoyed your story.
The first story I ever wrote was sci-fi so this one really got my attention. Great flow and excellent suspense.
After I read your story, I wondered what would happen next. I could see it continuing, maybe even bringing in Kate again. Very interesting and thought provoking.
I can't wait to find out your name. I'm a fan already. I love good sci-fi and this is really well written. Very enjoyable! Thank you!

God Bless and good luck in the contest. I hope you place high!
I'm not a fan of Sci-Fi, it's not my genre choice, but this was an exception...well done!

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 30th overall. Happy Dance!