The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed my trip through the Sahara with you. Detailed descriptions and imagery added depth to the story.

I hope this piece does well in the challenge.
I'm assuming this is non-fiction. Either way, I sure enjoyed the experience through your writing. Very well done.

I ejoyed this highly descriptive piece.
Well done.

God bless~
Congratulations on your 3rd place EC award, Jack.

I am so glad your story did well in the challenge!
A fascinating story. I really felt the mystique. They say that one finds God in the desert. The contrast with the city was done well.It made me think about our city experience and our relationship with God. We in the city are Cains ejected from the land. You have given me an appetite to visit our Australian desert. A very different experience to be sure, but perhaps comparable. Not greige, but red dust.
Abraham was a traveler. I value that thought.You have deepened it for me. Congratulations on the EC place.
Congratulations on your placing for this strong mix of showing and telling.
Wow! Congratulations on your EC 3rd place win. I think this is non-fiction as well. So graphic! I loved this journey through the desert.
You have a gift for drawing spectacular world pictures Jack. I think it may be your experience as a traveler that paints the story with vivid color even a midst the griege.