The Official Writing Challenge
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You held me DEEP in the actions and thoughts of your MC. Thank you for an excellent story.
Powerfully done!

God bless~
A creative and gripping tale. I like the glimmer of hope that stops short of neatly tying up the loose ends.
You got my attention from the start and held me to the end. Gripping. Very well done.


I liked how the MC spelled out HELP with his goodies. I love to read a good mystery, and this entry sure didn't disappoint.
This article was suspenseful from beginning to end. Very creatively written.
Congratulation on your EC award.
Congratulations on your 10th place EC award, Donna.

I loved this well written and creative piece.
Congratulations, Donna, on your EC. I thought it should hae been higher, but what do I know. :)
Forgot to mention that you chose a great title.
Congratulations on your EC, for an entry that builds the suspense and provides a credible - though long-shot twist to wrap it up.
Mic drop!!!!!! That was an amazing ending:) you are really getting good! Well done, and I can't wait to see more in the future :-)
I was so glad that Becky trusted her instincts!