The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 353 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
01/29/16
I loved your story! So well written. You are a master craftsman.

The descriptions of the fishing, making sandy snowmen and the toddlers playing together were particularly delightful. A joy to read.
01/30/16
Excellent use of the topic this well written and entertaining tale.

God bless~
You took me right in. I must read more of you. This is excellent!
01/31/16
Love the warmth of your descriptions and the gentle energy that flows through them.
01/31/16
Your ability to bring life to a description is amazing!

I enjoyed the warm easy tone, in the light humor at the end left me grinning:)
02/01/16
Your lovely descriptions make me long for a vacation like the one you describe. Nice job.
02/03/16
An interesting article.

Near the end I was confused about January in Virginia. I think the story stands well on its own without this part.

I really enjoyed the reason for fishing. Very well written.

Nice job