The Official Writing Challenge
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Hilarious! A fun story with a catchy title. Well-written and engaging. The obsession with cellphones these days is rather haunting. :)
01/21/16
Your story was intriguing, and I enjoyed the ending.
01/24/16
Loved this! You set it up so well with the title and then lead the reader down the trail of a good morality tale. The twist at the end speaks on many levels and one still gets the moral of the story about the dangers of focusing on evil. This was very well written and spot on with the topic.