The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/16
I assume this is a true story and what a tale of the Lord's protection! I believe it could benefit from being treated as fiction in the telling. In other words, weave it as a story, rather than a straightforward documentary. The story is worth the effort to paint an evocative picture of the scene with less factual details about names of locations and more emotion and imagery to capture the reader. You obviously have the writing talent to do it.
01/27/16
I could relate to yourstory, having experienced the narrow roads of Srilanka. You described the high expectations of an outing that almost turned to tragedy. I'd like to read more.