The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/16
I never saw that ending coming. Great work.
01/22/16
This was well written from the beginning to the end. It had just the right amount of red herrings to throw me off track.
The yoke was on them. Good job.
01/27/16
Great story, one of my favorites. I read it to my family.
01/28/16
Congratulations!

Didn't have a chance to get to all of the entries, glad I got to today!

God Bless~
01/28/16
Congratulations on your 9th place EC award.

This was a clever and fun piece to read.
When I read through some of the articles earlier in the week, this was one of my favorites. I liked the surprise to the very satisfying ending. Congratulations on the EC!
Congratulations on your EC award with this wonderful story!