The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/16
I can honestly say your ending was unexpected. You did a great job describing the MC's situation--inside and out--using so few words. I'm sorry to learn it's based on a true story because it's so sad, but it's a good one for the topic this week. Thanks for sharing.
01/22/16
It reminds me of a call I got from Florida from "my father". I'm glad my dad was still alive and standing near me.

It must have been an eerie experience.
01/25/16
Wow- I can only say I would have felt the same way now that my mom is passed.

Excellent writing my friend.

God bless~