The Official Writing Challenge
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Your descriptions are wonderful. I was shivering by the time I finished. Loved the ending where she gets away.
This is a chilling tale on domestic abuse and how prevalent it is. It broke my heart, yet at the same time gave me a glimmer of hope for those entrenched in the cycle. Great job.
This story was so emotional--anger, sadness, and hope. The MC was very believable. Well done.
I love the hope filled ending. You did a great job showing the MC's inner conflict when Danny showed up, and your descriptions were vivid throughout.
Powerful descriptions that connect with us on so many levels. A definite EC coming your way.
I adore your detailed descriptions. You have a way of keeping the reader riveted all the way through and the ending was perfect. Definitely an EC for you!
Powerful and compelling read. Sad reality is so many face this horrific scenario, day after day.

Great optimistic ending.

God bless~
Congratulations on your EC, Rachel! Your writing is so vivid. I could even picture in my mind a particular station where this could have happened.
Congratulations on your 1st place EC award, Rachel. I was sure it was a winner the first time I read it.
I knew this had to be winner this week. Congratulations. Fantastic writing!
Overwhelmingly powerful! Do you descriptions or compelling and spot on. Congrats!
Nice job! I aspire to write so well.
Top notch writing. Congratulations on your well deserved placement.
Rachel - Congratulations - done incredibly well. Hope to be able to write like a 'master' someday.

A job well done.
Congratulations, Rachel. Glad to see this vivid, well-crafted and paced story take top honors.
Congratulations. Your outstanding writing definitely says "First Place."