The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the names of the stuffed animals. Children sure do find a way to outwit even the smartest and brightest.

This story really brightened my day.
Very cute story. Very original and creative.
A story brilliantly told. Very interesting names for the animals.
This is brilliant! I was smiling the whole time. I even went back and counted the animals to see how many great names you came up with. I think I had 15 (not counting Bertha and Clarence). This is one of my favorites. The ending was wonderful.
Oh, I love this light-hearted tale of little girl out-witting daddy. The beginning was good as I was led to believe it would be a serious matter that needed to be dealt with. And the ending was even better when she played him at his own game. Great fun story!
I absolutely loved this! Awesome ending! I really hope this story does well in the challenge.
This gets better every time I go back and read it again. I love what you did with the ending!!
Loved the humour seeping through this story. I have to ask, however, was it really true - or just a menagerie tale?
Thanks for a fun read.
This is priceless! I liked it so much I read it to my brother and sister-in-law who have two small children with a start on their own menagerie. We had a good time laughing over your story.
A delightful story. I was right there with
A delightful story. I was right there with
A delightful story. I was right there with Colonel O'Sullivan wondering which animal Kaitlyn was going to choose. I did wonder why the common names of the animals were capitalized, but that didn't keep me from thoroughly enjoying your surprise ending. Great job!
So sorry for the multiple comments. This was my first attempt to post :/
Sweet! I loved the interaction between father and daughter. Well done.

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 25 overall. Happy Dance!
Good to see you in the challenge, Virginia. Shocked that this isn't ranked higher! :(