The Official Writing Challenge
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You have a delightful subtle sense of humor. I enjoyed this and thought the last line was simply brilliant. You tackled the topic in a fresh way for sure. This is one of my favorite stories.
12/04/15
The interview was a clever format. I really appreciated the unexpected ending.
Funny, yet meaningful allegory. Completely on topic. The ending was amazing!
12/05/15
I agree with all the remarks you have already received. I particularly like the gotcha in the final line. Well done.
12/07/15
Great build-up to a classic way to defuse the question that burns in too many minds. Well done.
Brilliant writing. There were so many precious gems in this timely allegory. The ending was so perfectly timed. A refreshing approach to the topic.
12/10/15
Loved this! Powerful message sprinkled with humor! So well done!
12/10/15
Congratulations on your EC award, Amy, for this cleverly written piece.
12/10/15
Congrats!

God bless~
12/10/15
Congrats on your EC.
12/10/15
Congratulations on your well deserved Win!
Congratulations!!! I'm so glad this story did this well.
12/10/15
Congratulations on your placing and on your EC.
Congratulations on your EC.
12/14/15
Just perfect all the way around. Loved your concept,the dialogue, and the King's concluding words!
Your last line, word picture - sends thrills through me! Congratulations on an excellent piece!