The Official Writing Challenge
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11/28/15
You've packed a lot into this story, which opens up some exciting possibilities as we have to leave it. Very descriptive and credible.
I enjoyed this tale. I love the faith of your MC. It felt real because she basically believed, but was occasionally caught up in doubt. I know I often do that myself. Although the ending was a tad predictable, I still enjoyed every word. You did an awesome job.
12/01/15
Highly entertaining and plausible story...well done.

God bless~
12/03/15
Congrats!
God bless~
I enjoyed the second read of this delightful story as much as the first. Congratulations
12/03/15
Congratulations on your EC award. Fast paced story.

The only thing that was slightly confusing was if the MC was only sentenced for 15 years; why was she still in there after 20 years.
12/03/15
Congrats on your EC. Great work.
12/05/15
I appreciate all the comments that have been left for me. They all help me see things from a different perspective, and help me learn and grow. Thanks so much, and blessings on you!.