The Official Writing Challenge
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You've packed a lot into this story, which opens up some exciting possibilities as we have to leave it. Very descriptive and credible.
I enjoyed this tale. I love the faith of your MC. It felt real because she basically believed, but was occasionally caught up in doubt. I know I often do that myself. Although the ending was a tad predictable, I still enjoyed every word. You did an awesome job.
Highly entertaining and plausible story...well done.

God bless~
God bless~
I enjoyed the second read of this delightful story as much as the first. Congratulations
Congratulations on your EC award. Fast paced story.

The only thing that was slightly confusing was if the MC was only sentenced for 15 years; why was she still in there after 20 years.
Congrats on your EC. Great work.
I appreciate all the comments that have been left for me. They all help me see things from a different perspective, and help me learn and grow. Thanks so much, and blessings on you!.