The Official Writing Challenge
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11/26/15
You've set the scene for a much longer story. Drat that word limit!!!!
You do an awesome job of building this story. I sensed some deep ache in the MC right away. You built upon that at exactly the right pace. This was an easy read; I mean that as a great compliment. It was easy to read because you pulled me in with the conflict and the right amount of details to paint a picture in my head. My mind didn't wander at all. I enjoyed it beginning to end.
12/01/15
One never knows what an act of kindness will bring. Your story was touching and well told.

God Bless
12/01/15
I wanted more! Well done.

God bless~
12/03/15
Congrats!
God bless~
12/03/15
Wow! What an ending! I love the "God-Send" theme throughout! I (very much) appreciate your super craftsmanship in your writing. Congrats on your EC, Holly!
12/03/15
Congratulations on your EC, Holly. Such a tender and heart-wrenching story.
12/03/15
Well done on your EC Holly.
Great job.