The Official Writing Challenge
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11/28/15
This is such a strong launch-pad for so many challenging thoughts, and you have constructed it from such an economical use of language. Great job.
Wow, I really liked how you turned that one verse about a rich man getting into heaven into such a stunning g poem. You are a true artist.
Brilliant depiction of starvation and isolation without our Lord . . .
11/30/15
You put so many things to think about into such a short poem.

My favorite line was "treasure that glitters for Treasure that bleeds".
12/01/15
Beautifully done.

God bless~
12/03/15
Congrats!
God bless~
12/03/15
Congratulations, Melanie, for your EC award.
12/03/15
Congrats on your EC. Well deserved.