The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerful message.
God bless~
Gently insightful work.
I literally had to wipe a tear away before I could leave a comment. You did a stellar job of getting inside this MC. Sadly, I could relate in many ways, even though right now I'm snuggled warm in bed. The feelings of bring unworthy are ones most can identify with, no matter their social status. Thank God, Jesus didn't die just for those who are worthy--none of us would see the Pearly Gates. I noticed your tense slipped from past to present and back again, but your piece is so powerful it really didn't matter at all. I only mention it because I urge you to publish this. I wish everyone in the world could read your words. I believe there is a home for this wonderful poem. I'm not sure where, but I've no doubt God does.
There are too many invisible people who walk the streets each day.

Your poem really brings clarity to their reality.
I hope this does well in the challenge this week.
God bless~
Congratulations, Donna, on your well deserved EC award.
This poem stirred the emotions.
I love your poetic talent in this poignant tale. Excellent creativity for the topic. Congrats on your EC!
Congrats on your EC. EC 2CY you gained this ranking. Well done.