The Official Writing Challenge
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11/26/15
Well written and you nailed the topic completely.

God bless~
11/27/15
Clever use of narrative and dialogue to draw us into your story as we explore your MC's journey. Well done.
What a powerful story. Not only did you entertain me, but you educated me as well. The suspense was perfect. Your message was clear, but not preachy. The ending left me with a warm smile and a good feeling. Nicely done.
11/30/15
This was an interesting story from beginning to end--a unique one to be sure.

I hope the judges take note!

Good luck. God Bless!