The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/15
Highly-descriptive build up to a terrific twist at the end.
11/22/15
I agree with the above comment, this story is rich in detail and very well crafted, but... forgive me, I simply don't get it. The brilliant twist at the end has eluded me. I'm not the sharpest tool in the box, so hopefully the next person's comment will enlighten me. However, great job!
11/25/15
I'm with you Danielle. Just sitting here scratching my head.