The Official Writing Challenge
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11/13/15
Well constructed work, with clear imagery in each stanza followed by the strength of its repetitious closing thought.
This poem describes well our times and the many deductions of Christian influence.
Oh, this is so good! It was moving; so moving that I wasn't even tempted to critique it for grammar, spelling, etc. Beautiful, spiritual words that perfectly describe man's human condition.
11/16/15
Really well written and carried through.
11/19/15
Linda,

Precise and powerful!

This piece resonates within my heart...well done my friend!

I've missed your entries, so good to see your work after such a long absence.

Hope all is well with you and yours.

God Bless~