The Official Writing Challenge
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11/06/15
Isn't it just like people - pray and when our prayers are answered, give credit to someone, or something, other than God? Good job, thanks for all your hard work. Best of luck in the Challenge!
I enjoyed this suspenseful story, that superbly illustrates Gods providence, never to be confused with "coincidence."
11/07/15
It is interesting that many people only pray when they are in trouble, and then give the honor to someone or something else.

I think you meant Mark instead of Mak's dune buggy.
I enjoyed this unique take on the topic. I think the word "Chill" was overused a tiny bit but the story was so well written regardless. Best wishes, I hope you place well.
11/11/15
Very interesting story. I agree you didn't give God the credit for sending the two desert creatures to save your life. At least, you remembered to pray.