The Official Writing Challenge
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Isn't it just like people - pray and when our prayers are answered, give credit to someone, or something, other than God? Good job, thanks for all your hard work. Best of luck in the Challenge!
I enjoyed this suspenseful story, that superbly illustrates Gods providence, never to be confused with "coincidence."
It is interesting that many people only pray when they are in trouble, and then give the honor to someone or something else.

I think you meant Mark instead of Mak's dune buggy.
I enjoyed this unique take on the topic. I think the word "Chill" was overused a tiny bit but the story was so well written regardless. Best wishes, I hope you place well.
Very interesting story. I agree you didn't give God the credit for sending the two desert creatures to save your life. At least, you remembered to pray.