The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! I loved this piece. Creative and intriguing. The ending left me wanting to know more, but thankful that it wasn't tied up in a neat bow.

Your writing was clear and vivid with a 'chilling' effect. Well done!
Good tale telling the ravages of ,is it alzheimers?. I liked how we were left hanging, ie.i'm wondering if this sharp tool that she put in her waistband had some "effect" on her sleepy state???
11/09/15
Very descriptive exploration of your MC's outing, with a little intrigue climbing over your wrap-up. Well done.
Oh this is like eating a fancy dessert. So good you can't help but ask for more. Well done.
11/10/15
So sad. Well done.
11/11/15
Great job! You had me all the way through. Thanks for the reminder of how vulnerable folks can be, and how quick things can happen. Best of luck in the Challenge!
Congratulations on ranking 14th overall! Happy Dance!