The Official Writing Challenge
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Your imagery was beautiful. Great job!
10/28/15
Oh wow! I had to read this twice. There is so much in each line - the symbolism is strong. It's beautiful. I didn't need a photo to see the picture.
10/28/15
Oh, so beautiful! A rendering of the soul, before, as an innocent, scarred with sins, and then put right finally--once again bright-- with Grace! Lovely, lovely.
10/29/15
Beautiful and touching, I really enjoyed this.
10/29/15
Congratulations on your 1st place overall, Margaret. You definitely have a gift with words. This is going to be downloaded into my favorites.
10/29/15
Congrats! Great work.
Awesome piece! I'm not surprised it's placed so highly. Big congratulations on a well-deserved win.
10/29/15
Margaret, this is beautiful and very moving. Congratulations on your win. This poem certainly deserved it. This is another of your lovely poetic works.I'm saving it too.
11/02/15
Your final stanza clarifies everything. I wanted to go back and reread to catch each allusion. What a beautiful message in exotic verse. Congrats, Margaret.