The Official Writing Challenge
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Your imagery was beautiful. Great job!
Oh wow! I had to read this twice. There is so much in each line - the symbolism is strong. It's beautiful. I didn't need a photo to see the picture.
Oh, so beautiful! A rendering of the soul, before, as an innocent, scarred with sins, and then put right finally--once again bright-- with Grace! Lovely, lovely.
Beautiful and touching, I really enjoyed this.
Congratulations on your 1st place overall, Margaret. You definitely have a gift with words. This is going to be downloaded into my favorites.
Congrats! Great work.
Awesome piece! I'm not surprised it's placed so highly. Big congratulations on a well-deserved win.
Margaret, this is beautiful and very moving. Congratulations on your win. This poem certainly deserved it. This is another of your lovely poetic works.I'm saving it too.
Your final stanza clarifies everything. I wanted to go back and reread to catch each allusion. What a beautiful message in exotic verse. Congrats, Margaret.