The Official Writing Challenge
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Just lovely. What a wonderful poem! Such clarity of truth in excellent rhythm and rhyme. Loved reading this.
10/25/15
Well done. You presented truth in a compelling piece that ebbs & flows. Your rhymes did not sound contrived or forced, but naturally fit. Best poetic piece I've read so far this week. Blessings.
I have to agree with Sheldon. This poem just blew me away. I hope this piece gets the credit it deserves. Awesome job!
10/28/15
Lovely descriptions and word images! The last stanzas are so wonderful to read, and knowing how true, a blessing to receive.
10/29/15
Congratulations, Vincent, on your 7th place EC award.

I love the meter and cadence of your poetry.
So glad this wonderful poem received a well deserved EC. Great clarity of truth written in beautiful lines. Many congrats.
I'm so pleased to see your piece place highly. This poem is amazing from start through to finish. Congratulations!
10/30/15
Congratulations, Vincent, on your EC for this lovely poem so rich with meaning.