The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/15
Tenderly written poem. I especially enjoyed the first stanza.
10/18/15
Beautiful poem about a father making sure his children are all safe in the fold at all stages of their life. I like how you started each stanza with "is the fold all in asks the father".
How much more our Heavenly Father takes care of us.Good job! God bless, LaVonne
10/18/15
i usually am not a huge fan of poems, but this one touched my heart, and kept my attention until the end. There's nothing like a father's (earthly or heavenly) love and protection.
10/19/15
Well done. The tender care of The Father's love shines through.
10/20/15
This is a lovely poem and it's a great use of the topic. I really enjoyed it.
10/22/15
Congratulations on your EC award, Verna.
10/26/15
I was captivated by the progression of age in each stanza, then I loved the father's prayer in the final stanza. Your message is comforting. Congrats, dear friend, on your HC AND EC!! <3