The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/15
This sounds zest like the doctor ordered, for it took me back to an English colleague's experience. He'd been appointed to pastor a moribund church - where the only life was the ivy growing up the wall! When he heard about the Victory Group meeting, he went along and found it as dead as everything else. Their leader explained that their name came from WW2, when they began meeting to pray for victory over Germany. With that victory achieved, they just kept meeting!
I like the way your story opened up some changes. Well done.
10/11/15
I really like your sense of humor in writing this story. It must have been fun to write. And the ending was great. I'm old enough to be a Zest lady. All they needed was to be needed. Well done.
10/13/15
Interesting story. It held my attention throughout.
Well done.

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall! Happy Dance!