The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/15
You have treated us to a larger than life character as we got to know Nick - and what a great legacy he has left (for us to imagine...)
Excellent writing.
10/09/15
Touching...well done.

God bless~
10/09/15
What a great title to a great story. The characters were wonderful, the setting just right and this was incredibly well-written. I like how Nick influenced the men as well as the women. Well done.
This is such a cute story. I especially loved the last part. Very touching. Keep writing!
10/17/15
Congratulations on your 3rd place EC award, Donna.

Nick was certainly a charmer and an interesting MC.
10/18/15
Loved this! And, learned from it. Your descriptions were short and concise, tightly written and quite enjoyable. My mother just recently entered assisted living and this gave me hope as I could totally see her role in this group of characters. She was the one playing the piano and watching the shenanigans going on around her and enjoying it.
10/24/15
Good story. I really liked the way the other guys started behaving like Nick, after he left. Congratulations on EC 3rd!