The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/15
I love the humour that flows through this story, but it seems (to me) that you've run up against that pesky word limit. You've set the scene and introduced some great potential dialogue between your MC and the other guests at the function, for I felt that we need to hear more of what goes through the mayor's mind before his announcement.
10/09/15
Nicely done.

God bless~
10/09/15
I like the unique slant you took for this week's theme. Funny and entertaining with a zesty character to boot. I liked the voice of your mc.
Congratulations on ranking 23 overall! Happy Dance!