The Official Writing Challenge
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This is divine. You did such a great job with your descriptions, I could feel my blood pressure rise as I pictured myself in that scenario. I don't do well with crowds and strange places. Although I likely never see that part of the world, you took me on a wonderful journey that fully satisfied my curiosity.
09/05/15
Liked the title, and your descriptions of the energy, the colour and the mayhem of the whole scene. Thanks for a good fun read.
09/09/15
Great read!
God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 12th overall! Happy Dance!