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09/05/15
A fun little cameo with clever and credible dialogue and characters. Good work.
09/07/15
My granddaughter is 19 months old. I can relate with the grandma and grandchild interaction. I enjoyed your story. Thanks..
I love how you captured a child's perception of everything going on around them! That was definitely a unique and clever take on the topic. Great job!
09/09/15
I really enjoyed this story and the grandparent-grandchild interactions and dialogue with its touches of humor.
09/09/15
Touching, my sister will enjoy this, I've forwarded it to her.

Nice job.

God bless~
09/10/15
Very cute story! You captured the voice and actions of a three year old so well!
09/10/15
Congrats on ranking 14th, Shann! Applause!
This story had me laughing from beginning to end. You did a great job of capturing the story from a child's perspective. Happy dance Shannon.
11/06/15
Don't you love hearing the perceptions of kids? You nailed this!
This put a smile on my face. Children can so easily confuse similar sounding words and phrases.
One belated smidge of red ink... Unless she heard it often, I'm having trouble picturing a three year old saying "That's a relief."
Thank you so much for your ongoing kind words and encouragement to so many here at FW.