The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely poem. It flows nicely and is really true to the Bible story and how Moses and his family must have felt. I'm not sure if you nailed the topic since it specified checking in or out of a hotel, but I do think it's beautiful. It is a wonderful depiction of the familiar Bible story. Poetry isn't my favorite genre, but I certainly enjoyed this.
09/09/15
Beautifully expresed.
I loved it.

God bless~