The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this very descriptive account of what must have been a very vivid experience for you and everyone who shared it with you. Loved the subtle humour as well. And well done for being so clever at simultaneously sticking to the topic while remaining totally irrelephant!

Great job.
Wow, this is stunning. You grabbed my attention immediately. You did a splendid job of building the suspense. I suspected it would be an African animal, but you described it so perfectly. Oh, I want to go there. Outstanding story. I love it!
Well done!

God bless~
Congratulations! I loved reading this story. Well deserved.
Congratulations on your EC. Great job.
Congratulations, Marty, on your 2nd place EC. I really enjoyed your story with the elephants checking in. If you, yourself, have actually experienced this it must have been amazing. Great writing.
I've never been to Africa, but now I really want to go! You brought the scene and those in it to life in spectacular fashion. Congratulations on your EC placing - this is a brilliant piece!