The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/15
Romantic and poetic, this story really does light up the page. A good reminder for couples to keep the flame burning and spend special time together.

I love your writing and think this is another winner!
That was so, so beautiful. Drama with touches of humor, and lovely character-building. Bravo!
08/15/15
Beautiful love story. I loved it.
08/16/15
Ooh, a romantic entry! I really enjoyed it and your lovely telling of this Venetian rekindling of their romance.
Your descriptive writing blows me away, both of the scene and those in it. This is exquisite stuff.
08/20/15
Very absorbing descriptions and evocative style. You drew me in with your warmth and your wistfulness, and your positive close wraps up a fine piece of writing.
This is a beautifully written story about love. Your opening lines drew me in. This illustrates that love takes time to build. We need to fan the flame to keep a marriage relationship from dying out. I am sure your wife will cherish this piece of work because it was written from your heart.
08/20/15
Congratulations on your 9th place EC award, Zach! You're a gifted storyteller.
08/26/15
Your grasp of the danger of complacency wrought through your story and the redemption in love is a brilliant reminder. Thank you!