The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a heartwarming tale about the love of two brothers. A future hope of eternity. The storytelling was intricately weaved throughout the story. The dialogue seemed so real. Almost like I was listening in.
08/06/15
Wow, this one touched my heart and made me cry. Tenderly written and immensely stirring.

God bless~
The emotion here feels real. The story if excellent.
08/08/15
You have a real gift for storytelling and this one is no exception. I like the way you slowly unfold the details to move the story along to a sad ending, yet also filled with hope. Great job!
This one has winner written all over it. Beautifully done - the emotion is so palpable. Outstanding stuff!
08/09/15
Congratulations already, for you have captured so much descriptive detail and personal feelings in this story. All through the window of authenticity.
Great work.
Your excellent writing always touches my heart . . .
08/13/15
Congrats Zach on yet another EC win. Well deserved!
08/13/15
Congratulations again Zac. Another HC so soon. Well done.
08/15/15
Congratulations on your EC award, Zach. The story, while sad, is filled with hope. I remember when you could get pop for pocket change. You have a wonderful writing style and you always leave me wanting more.