The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/15
I loved the conclusion. Sometimes the best vacations are the "staycation" ones.

Great job.

God bless~
08/06/15
I think the Franklin family was pretty wise in making this big decision, especially with the baby and what the baby preferred to do. :) Each family member's stanza couldn't have been more perfect, and each was punctuated with that little baby. :) I love this!
Fantastic piece and completely out of the box! It's something I relate to, having kids of very diverse ages. Yep, staycations have a lot going for them.

I loved the way you captured each member of the Franklin family and how their uniqueness shone through. Brilliant piece!
08/09/15
Loved the range of preferences and plans; and how a fully-exposed ending still took us all by surprise. A good fun read.
08/11/15
ha! The power of democracy:) This was pleasant, with a funny and realistic ending:)
I LOVE this!