The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh this was an amazing story coming full circle to a powerful close!

I loved this fabulous entry, I pray it does well.

Thanks for making my heart smile.

God bless~
What a treat this entry is!!!!! Well deserved first place!!!! Clean writing with a perfect ending:)
I was totally absorbed in this entry. I almost stopped breathing when the mother spotted her daughter at the bottom of the pool. A well deserved win. Congratulations!
Congrats Jack!
Brilliant work.
Your active descriptions even embracing things that happen silently - like the sun sucking all moisture out of the ground. Building "the niggle" from obscurity to clarity, as an on-going reminder of God's presence and protection, was a master stroke.
And your close was terrific.
Congratulations on you first place win in EC. This was a gripping and poignant moment when you found your daughter alive and well after falling in the water. The point that you made about God watching over you was memorable.
Congratulations Jack on your 1st place EC award. God really does watch over us!
Congratulations on your win! It's well deserved for this gripping account. Great writing!