The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I loved this whole entry. Exciting and powerful message too!

God bless~
Oh what a delightful read. You did a wonderful job of building the suspense and the pacing was perfect. I totally enjoyed it and felt immersed in the story. I think you were on topic, and it was definitely fresh, fun, and fantastic.
Congratulations on ranking 15 overall. Happy Dance!