The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful. The words just flew off the page straight into my heart. I can totally relate to this as my husband and I just had a weekend getaway, just the two of us for the first time since our honeymoon. Your poem depicts my emotions perfectly.
08/03/15
Relaxing, peaceful, satisfying and lovely.
God bless~
This poem was engaging. It had a calming affect on me. I could image the peace and quiet from the way you wrote it.
08/06/15
Congratulations!

God bless~
Yay! Happy Dance! Congratulations!
I enjoyed the ride with you! Congratulations on EC!
08/06/15
Many years ago we had a VW Beetle and your super poem brought back memories. Congratulations on your win!
08/06/15
Congratulations on your placing, and I loved that slightly guilty twist at the end. Well done.
08/08/15
I love your charming story. Your meter is perfect. Your images are smile-worthy. Just excellent work, Ellen. Congrats on your Editor's Choice!!!
08/08/15
You composed a short and savvy masterpiece.