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08/03/15
This was such a powerful story, I loved the ending wrapping up with the possiblity of adoption. Well done.

God bless~
This is really good. I lived the descriptions. I remember those resorts in the Poconos. We spent our honeymoon at one. I liked your message too. So often, people won't take help. When I mention that by refusing, they are robbing me of the blessings of helping others. I'm sure I'm not alone in that. It's not always easy to take help, but oh boy, does God ever do amazing things when we allow him.
08/06/15
I think you did a great job with the stories progression. I could see it being played out. The ending satisfied, too. Super title!