The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/15
Thank you for such an enthralling entry filled with so many dazzling images that splashed through my mind. Wonderful job with the topic and a fabulous message attached in the interim.

God bless~
This is a lovely jaunt down memory lane. You made it feel so real. You painted some great pictures. You nailed the topic. Though you last paragraph felt a bit forced or out of place to me, the message is perfect. God is always with us, even when we refuse to recognize him. Nicely done.
08/06/15
Congratulations Jack!

God bless~
08/06/15
Congrats on your EC, for your descriptive and absorbing read. Having lived near the sea, and on hilltops, I've enjoyed many pauses to drink in the mesmeric beauty of seascapes and sunsets, but you've lifted that sense to include the privilege of sharing it with someone special.
08/08/15
Congratulations, Jack, on your EC. You've told this story of memories beautifully. Great writing!
08/09/15
You weaved a good bit of advise into your stunning imagery. Well done.