The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! Great story! So sad, but very interesting and sweet. Keep writing! :)
This is a great story. The pacing is perfect. The suspense built up throughout the entire read. I think you did a wonderful job of sprinkling the topic throughout the piece.
06/16/15
I like how you describe the scene - and reveal how Edward's doubts are gradually corroded by an increasing amount of persuasion.